I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, June 2, 2020
my first blog post
hello readers welcome to my first blog post. this was one off my activity i had to make my dream bedroom and name everything in it.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Olly, congratulations on your first blog post. I can't wait to see what you share in the future. I love the way that you included a pet parrot and cat. That master closet looks awesome! Imagine how much clothes you can fit in there? Next time you could add a map view of where everything is located.
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DeleteKia ora Olly,
ReplyDeleteAwesome work on your first post. Thank you for explaining what the slide was about - that helped me understand why you posted it!
I love the walk in closet! Do you have a lot of clothes or shoes to fill it with? I wonder whether your cat and parrot will get along?
- Miss Morgan
they do get along
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